Rambling and a lame attempt at Kirk/Spock Prime

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Classes boring as always... yay?

Just wanted to say: I hate word limits. Not in drabbles and such, but in papers I have to write for my composition classes. How the hell am I supposed to fit an introduction, a few paragraphs of the main body plus write a decent plot plus use extended vocabulary into 250 words???

Maybe I'm no writer, I dunno.

Thing is, when writing a fanfic I don't have to create a new universe, new characters, places, sometimes even situations or part of the plot; it's always possible to re-write or write a different take on a canon scene/episode/chapter/arc/etc. I already have all needed information and so have the readers. I write by adding, not by creating from scratch. I don't have to explain every single thing the character does, his/her intentions, way of thinking, hell even the looks.

I keep keep on rambling and I wrote maybe two fanfics so far. It's weird. Forgive me. I am no writer.

Woe is me.

Now, to the promised lame attempt at K/SP:

***

I have to admit, it is difficult not to reach out, to really touch, to caress that familiar mind, known as well as if it were my own.

So familiar, yet so alien.

I have to make myself remember that this is not Jim, not my Jim. This Jim never met his father. This Jim is not the captain of the Enterprise.

This Jim does not have hazel eyes.

And yet...

And yet my mind yearns to reach out, to find that now nonexistent bond I formed with that extraordinary human so many years ago, gradually, unconsciously.

A friendhip. Something more than friendship.

T'hy'la! my mind screams, and I cannot resist any more.

His blue eyes widen and in my mind's eye I can see the golden ones, filled with sorrow, the very same expression they wore when my father melded with him in search for my katra.

"Spock," he whispers.

Gods, please forgive me, I think, leaning forward to catch his lips with mine.

***

See? I am so lame.

Comments

[h-e-r-b-a-t-a.livejournal.com]

Oh, Ji, to jest P-I-Ę-K-N-E!!! A nie jakieś lame. Piękne, piękne. Dajesz radę jak nikt.

[jihime47.livejournal.com]

A ja jednak wolę twoją wersję.

I tak w ogóle, to zbyt wiele razy oglądałam tę scenę. Na mózg mi padła.

_{Zastanawiam się, jakim cudem nie dostałam powiadomienia mailem, że napisałaś komentarz...}